Saturday, March 21, 2015
In the search of what exactly love is, I was completely stuck, I had no idea where to begin, we all have an idea of what we believe love is and that to me is what makes love so unique to each individual, but to define love you have to understand the changes it can cause in your brain, but also throughout your whole body. Trying to describe to someone what it feels like to be falling in love, is just as hard as describing to someone what it feels like to feel a touch. It's almost impossible, because you really can't find the words to describe what it feels like to touch a rock or a hand, there are no words to describe that feeling, and this is exactly what it feels like in trying to describe what you are feeling when you are falling for that special individual. One thing we can see or sort of measure is what is happening in our body when we are falling in love. In our brains we release extra oxytocin, which is a hormone in our brain that is used in loving someone and building trust. In our body our heart beats ten times as fast, we start to sweat uncontrollably when we are around him or her, but is this love? Or just a reaction?
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-Get rid of the prepositional phrase at the beginning. I think it would be smoother if you started with words like, "While researching what...- When researching...- During my research on..."
ReplyDelete-Start a new sentence after "I had no idea where to begin."
-Try, "The diverse ideas on what we believe love is, is what makes love... as well as throughout your whole body."
-"Its almost impossible PERIOD... There really aren't words..."
-"there are no words to describe THE feeling..."
-"One thing we can see and measure is what happens in our body when..."
-"Our brain will release oxytocin, a hormone in our brain..."
-"Our heart rate increases, and we start to sweat..."
-"But, is this love?..."